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Sunday, November 17th, 2019

🦋 The form

So here is how I write the song form that I'm calling "rag" (hopefully making reference to that weird and intoxicating effect that Joplin attributes to "ragtime", and maybe to "raga" as well but who knows)

Start with: an earworm melody. Your own or somebody else's, or traditional. Fuck with the rhythm of it by lengthening some beats and shortening others -- get a melody with similar sequence of notes to the source but a drunken/stuttering sound. Notate this melody in Noteflight or similar software. (I am always using cello to notate this first step.) When you play it back it should be clear what song you are hearing and also clearly something funny about it.

Add parts. Usually I am adding a bass part first and then a treble or even two treble parts. Sometimes just a bass part or just a treble. I am generally using violin family instruments for my parts but that is just what I'm familiar with.

Bass part: generally quarter notes, sometimes eigth notes. I'm not using syncopation at all in the bass parts, for now. It seems pretty easy and natural to find a plunky bass pattern that fits the main melody, I'm not sure what technique is going into this. If there is a bass part, then make it pretty constant throughout the song, not coming in and out.

Treble part: listen to the main cello part over and over, with and without bass, until you start hearing ghost melodies that fit with it. Start notating them. The treble parts can rest a lot, they don't have to (and should not) be playing all the time. The ghost melodies should reinforce the primary melody.

B section: usually modulate down a fifth or up a fourth. No technique here, just whatever sounds good(?) or so to say quirky

End result: intro + A section, repeat, B section, repeat, d.s. al coda, outro. The main melody is on the cello but the treble parts are playing their own distinct melodies which can mask the main melody. Make sure they are quiet for a couple of key measures in each section.

See Counterpoint rag for examples.

posted morning of November 17th, 2019: Respond
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Saturday, November 16th, 2019

🦋 Counterpoint rag (demo ep)

Here is a form:



My Imaginary String Band performs 7 new songs that I've composed at Noteflight, links are to the individual scores --

(notes on the form here.)

posted afternoon of November 16th, 2019: Respond
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Sunday, October 27th, 2019

🦋 Asemic Ornithography

Xavi Bou's long exposure photography of birds in flight is breathtaking.

posted evening of October 27th, 2019: Respond
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Wednesday, October 9th, 2019

There are 50 ways to breathe, my brother.

posted evening of October 9th, 2019: Respond
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Tuesday, October 8th, 2019

🦋 O__u__en_e at O_l __ee_ B_id_e

A man stood upon a railroad bridge in northern Alabama, looking up at the blackboard....

posted morning of October 8th, 2019: Respond

🦋 Meaningless

I'm interested in the relationship between Asemic Writing/Logograms and Sound Poetry. Sound Poetry is to spoken language what Logograms is to written language: it succeeds by sounding superficially like language but without conveying meaning (at least, in the way that language traditionally conveys meaning). I'm interested in finding more examples of Sound Poetry; all I really have on tap currently are Altazor and this piece by Hugo Ball:

posted morning of October 8th, 2019: 3 responses
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Tuesday, September 17th, 2019

Hi, it's me... the dude that loves your statuses; the guy that laughs at the jokes you post.

posted morning of September 17th, 2019: 1 response

Monday, September 16th, 2019

Matter. Don't matter.
Matter, don't matter, doesn't matter/ in the Void

posted morning of September 16th, 2019: Respond
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🦋 Jiva and Atman

Jiva eats the fruit of the tree: Jiva is bound to the world. Jiva is part of the world.
Atman does not eat but watches.
Atman links Jiva to the supreme unity.

posted morning of September 16th, 2019: 2 responses
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Sunday, September 15th, 2019

🦋 Jagged

There was a jagged man, and he walked a jagged mile.
He found a jagged sixpence behind a jagged stile.
He bought a jagged cat that caught a jagged mouse.
They all lived together in a little jagged house.

posted morning of September 15th, 2019: 5 responses
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