🦋 The tintinnabulation of the night
Here is an idea I am liking, poetry-wise: I think I've hit on this rhythm and voice that will allow me to propel the text, to follow almost blindly the beats and consonants of the text and ultimately even to transcend the text. Here is a piece I wrote in that fashion, following this meter, yesterday -- as I say I like it, and find this a pleasant voice to adopt, cute, (semi blatant) echoes of Poe and of Whitman -- formally of one, excitement-wise of the other. The poem is to a prompt from Describli.
Lines iiby J. Osner
Read between the lines, lines marking boundaries that separate *within* from what's without. Read behind the words, the printed words are only messengers, the poem that's behind them's what you need. Read between the lines, dividing lines between the text and empty paper. Read behind the words, read through the text, it's a distraction from the message graven deep on every page. Read behind the page, now read the emptiness around you, shining message, read the tintinnabulation of the night, the air around you's humming, breathing, clicking, pounding, every line of every poem you've ever read's inscribed there, see it, read it, listen to the meter of the poem that's behind the text you're reading in the sweet night air, encoded in the symbols of the lines.
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